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Magnus LI: Disillusioned
DeshTheWraith 2:54 AM on November 04, 2009 (+0/-0)

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Something of a short one-shot. It'd be nice to see something like flashing back to various people he saved then forward to him witnessing their corrupt behavior.

Either way, I like it.

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Locke 2:56 AM on November 04, 2009 (+0/-0)
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His writing is really good.

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Lumino 3:02 AM on November 04, 2009 (+0/-0)

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Thank you very much both. Yeah, I've written for a while, but I threw this one down into text because I felt strongly about it at the time. I tend to write on emotional surges.

No better inspiration. Perhaps I'll throw down more later.

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Aries 3:33 AM on November 04, 2009 (+0/-0)

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Lumino wrote:
Thank you very much both. Yeah, I've written for a while, but I threw this one down into text because I felt strongly about it at the time. I tend to write on emotional surges.

No better inspiration. Perhaps I'll throw down more later.


You seriously are an excellent writer. Most writers I see nowadays are simply pathetic, but you're one of the rare few who can write.

Lumino, write a novel, I'm serious. You've got the knack.

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Magnus Sforzando 1:29 PM on November 04, 2009 (+0/-0)

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I really liked it. Nice work!

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Cea 11:52 AM on March 04, 2010 (+0/-0)

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Is this RP completed and able to be moved to the Archives?

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